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Open Question: Is this story good? Do you tihnk it could get published?
So this is an excerpt from the second chapter. Unedited, and not yet finished, but still. I just want to know what you think.
I led Carter over to one of the tables set up, but he claimed he had to go to the bathroom, and walked in the direction of the new girl, swinging her hips for the whole world. I didn’t see Carter the rest of that night, nor did I see her. I thought it was strange, but I over looked it. Made up excuses on Carter’s behalf. He loved me, or so I thought. I walked out to his red pickup, reaching toward the door, when I heard the car rattle. I got quite, it couldn’t be, but I felt the feeling in my chest. I tip toed up the window and peered in. None the less, I saw the new girl straddling Carter, naked no doubt, and him smiling up at her. And then he saw me, and they both laughed. Laughed like I wasn’t even there. I ran, ran away from him, from her. From the awful dance I never should of went to. And I heard them continue to laugh, wherever I went. The lake, the creek, the fields. No where I went erased the image of him below her. Their smiling faces.
When I got home, my eyes were clouded, and Momma couldn’t say anything to stop my shaking. My dad didn’t know what to do either, so I ran upstairs, and slammed my door shut. Rummaging through my closet for the one piece of equipment I was looking for. When I finally found them, I took the razor to the pretty blue dress. Slashed it up, still on my body. Blood and fabric mixed together on the floor, and I collapsed in pain. I took the dress of and continued to destroy it. I raked my past, I killed Carter, and I diminished love.
So why had I still felt so hurt? Because Carter was still laughing in my mind. He was still ruining my pride. That night I stayed up, wandering the shores of the creek banks, throwing rocks at fishes, and cradling my destroyed stomach. I didn’t come back for three days. I slept in the woods, and ate berries. I didn’t want to see the faces that reminded me so of the one I loved. When I heard them calling my name, I ran farther into the woods, I was so close to county line, I could have run across there, and been done with the night mare. From there I could have ran to the Mississippi River, and hoped on a strangers boat, ridden with them all the way up north. I could have started new, become the girl I always wanted to be. But I couldn’t, everything I ever known was there in Goodman. So I turned around, blocking out the musty smell of the river, running back towards my father’s worried voice.
When I got home, I laid in my bed, and starred at the ceiling. I didn’t know it then, but I had started a routine, to get up every morning, and just look at the ceiling at the stenciled stars. I couldn’t stand to think during those two hours when sleep shunned me, but life wasn’t ready for me yet, and I couldn’t imagine either. I just sat there devoid of emotion, devoid of pleasure, hate or rage. I was just the me I was always supposed to be. Fate was acting upon me, and I couldn’t act against it. My brain wasn’t in my hands, and I wasn’t in the right of mind during those two hours when I was dead. Each morning, you can count how many hours that makes me lifeless.
But I don’t think it’s my fault. Momma says I should hold my head high, that one day, a boy will come along for me. And I will love him, and he’ll love the real me. But how am I supposed to trust her, when the only thing I know it lies. Sometimes I wish my life were as easy as the new girl’s, but then I’d be bad. Not just bad as in the literal term, but I’d be a spoiled fruit, banned from Heaven. And I’ve been to too many church seminars to wish Hell upon me.
I’ve realized something, when my brain came back to me, I realized I was just like my father. As much as I tried to hate him, to reject him out of my life. I’m just like him. I hold grudges, and pose threats, though my words aren’t as strong as his. And my actions never as great, but deep down, I’m slowly turning into a card board cut out of my father. Not my Momma who’s sweet loving and kind, but the mean old man who sits on our front porch with a shot gun in hand, and beer cans around his feet.
Sometimes in life, the things we work for the most, maybe it be money, or a job, or in my case a different personality, are the thing we never get. And I’ve learned that hard way, but there are thing I didn’t know either. I didn’t know how my life was going to change it’s course in the matter of a year after the Carter incident, and I didn’t know I’d be stuck in this town forever. Just as stuck as the men who picked cotton in our back yard a hundred years ago.
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it’s about a girl in a small racist town in Mississippi that hold her to close for comfort. It’s about the love of her life leaving, and the new boy coming into play, the native American whom everyone hates.
It’s not really a story you’d expect out of a love novel, it’s called Nothing of Love, Everything of Hate.
sorry for repost, answers effed up and I couldn’t see any comments.. if there were any lol.
Yeah and um this is just an EXCERPT. not the whole thing, and it’s from chapter 2. not chapter 1. Chapter one was long, and already edited.
AND OMG, I spelled think wrong in the title. I think I’m going to shoot my computer. I hate misspelled words, please forgive me!
Open Question: A case of Friends with Benefits rated M (Some strong details)?
Ok so i have this thing with my step mums friend’s son. He’s 16 and im 14 in july. he just turned 16 2 weeks ago.
last summer we went to his holiday home up in Cavan (A county in Ireland–Im irish and am from dublin) anyway me and (ill give initials) C.N were cleaning his step dads boat on the lake. A neighbor who was 14 helped us. turns out we r all friends in the end and C.N knows her.
After we clean the boat the girl goes home and me and C.N go into the bottom of the boat where there is a small kitchen and living room space. We decide to watch a film so he goes and pops popcorn and i picked a film to watch in the bedroom area.
When we got the film going i was only wearing my oversize Adidas jumper from New York, Denim shorts and flip flops. about 15 Mins into the film C.N moved closer and put his arm around me. Im his Best friend so i snuggled closer. He lifted my chin up and just kissed me on the mouth. I was a little startled and then started kissing back. He started feeling around my waist and then put his hand down my pants. I wont give details but he made me orgasm. After we just had a major make out session and then i started to feel him. Anyway you get the jist kept moaning so i told him to stop and he said he coucouldn’tlp it and that he liked it. It was quite funny and every time he moaned i told him to shut up. He came and then we just fell asleep for a bit.
Ok so that part of the story no were goin to ggoing 2 weeks ago. C.N is just turned 16 and im turning 14 this july.
I was at his party and some of his friends were there. Near the end when only close friends (adults) were left C.N slipped out the back to the out house/ Office. He said he wanted to show me something so i followed. Once inside he brought me over to the leather couch and told me he really liked me . i told him so did i. Then he just started kissing me and we did the whole Boat thing again. When we righted ourselves we went outside. We were crossing the garden holding hands and giggling like kids. I looked up to the house and saw my step mum watching us while we held hands and had heavy lidded eyes.So i quickly let go and pretended nothing happened.
Thats it. Now i need to figure out if i should end it or keep it my secret? I dont think its fair i keep him held back with me and not with a girl his own age yet i still wnt to be with him.
Ive come to a conclusion and its to keep friends and just end it but still remember i had that experience with him. I did and still do like him alot but i think i should let him go. I am only 13 and im not ready for this type of relationship. im not stupid and i kow about sex protection and all that and so there is no need for anyone to tell me i could get knocked up with C.N junior or anything i mean come on i have a whole life ahead of me!!!
Ok thanks for the answers and pointing out the obvious for me i feel stupid for writting that story and i kno its illegal aswel but has that stopped some of the more stupid girls who get pregnant at 12 or 14? No thats what i dont get AT ALL!! i would sooo not have sex at my age even if i did have some form of it.
Thank you again ppl|!!! xx
I would like to thank cshar for his/her help but i have to disagree with u on one thing and that is about him thinking of me as cheap and only getting pleasure off me, i know all that i read the paper and look this stuff up with my BFF Ciara and ill just say that C.N treats me very well and has known me since i was 8 and i would never giver my self around to boys like that. My bff ciara said it was a Heat of the moment thing and i agree i wasnt really thinking like a clever person so thank you some more for everyones advice. Ive sworn off sex stuff till im at least 15/16
Open Question: What will American cities look like in twenty years?
What will Salt Lake City, Boise, ID, Las Vegas, New York City, Chicago, Los Angeles, San Francisco, and Seattle and their metro areas look like in 20 years? What will happen to the suburbs, existing single-family home neighborhoods, existing businesses, existing streets, freeways, etc.?
Will they downsize like Detroit, Flint, and Youngstown? Or is downsizing restricted to those three cities? Will this downsizing even happen?
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